I have just released this to public so i hope you like it! [smiley=wink.gif]

ps i like it when jack gets sent flying!

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hehe yeah jack flying!  ;D

......What? good mansion, but when does he fly? By the way- WHADDYA MEAN YOU LIKE BOOGERS!?

This could make it to the mansion list, but it needs a lot of fixing to do. By the way, I beat it in 11:08 with 28,650 and all secrets.

The number one thing to do when building a serious mansion is: Making sure there are no Jake-stucks (aka JS) and no cheap-deaths. (Thats kinda hard on Jack!)

There where some Jack-stucks here and there, but mostly in that jagged place at the end. You should jump around in those rooms with Jack and see if you can find a place that you can never get out of, unless you restart.

Also, cheap-deaths could put down the enjoyment of the game, because if you loose a life, you have to make sure the player thinks that it is their fault. Meaning: Don't put a lever in a room, which kills Jack. (e.g. 100 snakes falls on his head) Levers are meant for pulling.

You should give the player 10 seconds on a easy mansion to see the bad guy and react, and on normal mansions, 5 seconds, and hard, 2-3 seconds, and, well, super hard like... 1 second.

Also, don't put ledges RIGHT in the next room, give at least a space of... like 5 tiles.

Now this is just some advice, Omega, and YOU'RE building the mansion, not me. So, you don't have to do what I suggest.

Oh yeah, i haven't test the mansion until i have made my section yeah...  ::)

It's FUN to launch Jack  :)

Hi,

Very intriguing mansion.  I love the flying!  But I too want to know what you meant by boogers???    lol

But, Jack got stuck in Rm. 16902, he went up the bricks to check out for secret rooms and got stuck.  To bad to, I had a lot of lives.  

I think you did an amazing job using your creativity. [smiley=thumbsup.gif]
Great color schemes.

I look forward to playing a finished (tested ) version.

Missy, try The Mall, you'll like it a lot. It has launches which can be very challenging at first, but once you get the hang of it, it's a lot easier.

my little brother made this  :P he was 8 at the time and very hyper and weird at the time and he posted it using this account (AKA my old one) sooo yeah... its wierd isn't it? ~also there was never intended to be a sequel but i have used it in a mansion for the original game although i never got to post it...